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my fashion style is quite different from the styles presented in the text. I wear simple black T-shirt and more modern clothes than Canden Cool teens. I don’t wear as much jewellery as Ragga teens. My style is more similar to Goths style. I usually wear a black clothes but I wear like Skated Dude the most because it is more comfortable than the others.
ช่วยดูประโยคให้เราหน่อยได้มั้ยคะว่าควรปรับแก้ยังไง มีแนะนำว่าเป็นยังไงมั้นคะ