Question

candy

請問文法哪裡還有錯的呢⬇️
Yesterday， I show my skate skills for my love person Kevin. so we went the roller skate place to skate together.

I felt someone pushed me and I strike with Kevin. Then，Kevin hold my hand and started skate with me.
when we skate together, we told everything.
Such as food, interest and exercise.
I felt happiness and shame.

GEPT全民英語能力分級檢定測驗
Writing Proficiency Test
第二部份:段落寫作
題目:上個星期天,馬克和他的朋友到一座遊樂園玩。他們馬上就去排隊搭乘雲霄飛車。雲霄飛
車十分刺激,只不過馬克一下來就感到頭量目眩。請依照下面的圖片,寫一篇約50字的
故事。注意:未依提示作答者,將予扣分。
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Answer 1

Jun's

Yesterday I wanted to show my skating skills to Kevin, who I like, so we went skating on the rink. Suddenly someone gave me a push, causing me to accidentally bump into Kevin. Then Kevin asked me to go skating hand in hand with him.
這是題目的句子，可以再加點形容詞或副詞修飾一下還有結尾部分，例如：我跟凱文手牽著手溜冰，讓我感到又興奮又害羞，我們昨天度過了很美好的時光！

Answer 2

𝕃𝕖𝕤𝕝𝕖𝕪

文法蠻多錯的欸XDDD 而且你的作文是跟圖片有關係嗎？ 圖片是雲霄飛車roller coaster，但你寫的skate是溜冰

candy

拍錯圖了，是這張才對