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麻煩幫我看一下有沒有文法上的錯誤🙇‍♀️？

one day ,In the Internet ,Sally looks pair of boots and is very beautiful ,she is joy ,at the same time , she already buys pair of boots .recently, sally receive is boots but she find boots is smaller than her feet therefore,sally go to the shoes store and tell business this thing ,she didn't went to buy something in the internet next time.