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英検準2級のライティングで
Do you think school classrooms in Japan should use air conditioners in the summer？

という質問に対して

I think that school classrooms in Japan should use air conditioners in the summer. I have two reasons. The first reason is that to air conditioner is important. The second reasons is that air conditioner is useful.For these reasons that I explained above,school classrooms in Japan should use air conditioners in tha summer.

と、書いたのですがどうですか？誰か採点してください 🙇‍♂️🙏