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Expressing Post-reading Activity Express your opinions on one of the following questions in more than 50 words. Questions A. Which do you think is better, living with only a few things or with a lot of things? B. Where can you find an example of the "less is more" principle around you? C. Any other ideas? Expressions 【比較する】 Compared to ~,... (~と比べると...) ~ is similar to ... (~は...と類似している) For me, ~ is better. (私にとっては〜のほうがよりよい) 心を整えることができる。 I think living with only a few things is better. There are some benefit from organized. get unnecessary information and reduce our stress. Study work and so on room. First, because we, will not Second, we can concentrate on we can prepare our mind ¥30 compared to live with To live with a lot of lot, things. Moreover, motivation for them increases. Third, can be expected good luck. Someone understand It can "60" these benefit, but they cannot arrange the room member of them. However, I'm a our behavior can change from a small action. We will be happier if we can change

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5 ライ ライティング Sylio ●あなたは、外国人の知り合いから以下の QUESTION をされました。 QUESTION について, あなたの意見とその理由を2つ英文で書きなさい。 ●語数の目安は50語~60語です。 How boilornardison Kelah in the ●解答は,解答用紙のB面にあるライティング解答欄に書きなさい。 なお,解答 欄の外に書かれたものは採点されません。 bloodstonegunter ●解答が QUESTION に対応していないと判断された場合は, 0点と採点される ことがあります。 QUESTION をよく読んでから答えてください。 QUESTION Isw sboa srl bissd Yodt Do you think it is good for people to use smartphones while studying? M commended that people drink his fruit-

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02 READING 2050年の世界はどうなっているでしょうか。 CD1 01-03 very Will life be the same or will it be 01 Let's think (of life in 2050. different from ours? Some scientists say that we will have no oil by 2050. We use a lot of oil every day, don't we? If we continue to use a lot of oil as 続く we do today, we will need much more oil for everyone in the world. The people in developing countries who don't need much oil today will want to use 5 it to have a better life. ② Take cars, for example. Now there are about 600 million cars in the world. Many of them are in developed countries. But the people in some developing countries also want to have cars to change their way of life. They will have more cars and begin to use them soon. How much more oil will we 10 need in the future? 03 ⑤ It is very important to know about the world's energy problem and to start doing something now. Jova 受 ers alod 高9(税白) 8

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Note: This is not a word-for-word transcript. Neil Hello. This is 6 Minute English from BBC Learning English. I'm Neil. Beth And I'm Beth. Neil Shhh! Quiet please! I'm trying to read here, Beth! Beth Oh, excuse me! I didn't know this was a library. Neil Well, what exactly is a library? Have you ever thought about that? Beth Well, somewhere with lots of books I suppose, where you go to read or study. Neil A symbol of knowledge and learning, a place to keep warm in the winter, or somewhere to murder victims in a crime novel: libraries can be all of these things, and more. Beth In this programme, we'll be looking into the hidden life of the library, including one of the most famous, the Great Library of Alexandria, founded in ancient Egypt in around 285 BCE. And as usual, we'll be learning some useful new vocabulary, and doing it all in a whisper so as not to disturb anyone! Neil Glad to hear it! But before we get out our library cards, I have a question for you, Beth. Founded in 1973 in central London, the British Library is one of the largest libraries in the world, containing around 200 million books. But which of the following can be found on its shelves. Is it: a) the earliest known printing of the Bible? b) the first edition of The Times' newspaper from 1788? or, c) the original manuscripts of the Harry Potter books? Beth I'II guess it's the first edition of the famous British newspaper, 'The Times'. Neil OK, Beth, I'll reveal the answer at the end of the programme. Libraries mean different things to different people, so who better to ask than someone who has written the book on it, literally. Professor Andrew Pettegree is the author of a new book, 'A Fragile History of the Library'. Here he explains what a library means to him to BBC Radio 3 programme, Art & Ideas: Andrew Pettegree Well, in my view, a library is any collection of books which is deliberately put together by its owner or patron. So, in the 15th century a library can be 30 manuscripts painfully put together during the course of a lifetime, or it can be two shelves of paperbacks in your home. Beth Andrew defines a library as any collection of books someone has intentionally built up. This could be as simple as a few paperbacks, cheap books with a cover made of thick paper.

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○採点基準 【内容】 (5点) 1 自分の意見 (1点) 2 メリット (2点) 3 デメリット (2点) 【表現】(3点) 1 誤りがない / ほとんどない : 3点 2 いくつか間違いがあるが、 全体的に理解できる 2点 3 多くの間違いがあり、かろうじて理解できる程度: 1点 4 無関係な内容/ 無回答 / 50語未満: 0点 I think the online lessons suits me better than the lessons at school The Advantages of of online lesson is that you - 28 can study at your own pace The 35 disadvantages of online lesson is that it 42 is ditticalt To Communicate for these reason 49 I think the online lessons suits me 56 better than the lessons lessons at school. 63 70 10

「勉強するための時間」と「勉強を学ぶために留学する」のtoとforのちがいがよく分かりません

英作文のときに一番失敗しやす る。 たとえば日本語では, 目的を表すときに 「英語を勉強するために留学する」 と 言い、原因を表すときも「大雪のために電車が止まる」と同じように言うが、英語 ではこの目的を表す「…ために」と原因を表す「~ために」の使い分けが必要だ。 さらに,目的を表す「…ために」に関して言えば、 Lesson 34 で学んだように 本来は to 不定詞や〈so that〉 構文で表さなければならないのに,受験生の中には for を使おうとする人がよく見受けられる。 worl いく 他方 (○)I don't have any time to study. (○) I don't have any time for studying. (○) He went to the U.S. to study math. ④ (x) He went to the U.S. for studying math. 8 (O ⑨ (△ 10 (C exil uoy ob た る。 ては うに od 確かに、1や②の文の 「勉強するための時間」 のように名詞を修飾する場合は、 形容詞用法の to不定詞 ( 1の文)を使っても、②のように for を使ってもどちら でもよい。しかし③の「数学を学ぶために留学する」 のように動詞を修飾する場合、 つまり目的を表すには、④のように for を使うのは間違いだ。 3 のように to 不定 詞を使うか または <so that〉 構文を使わなければならない。 こうしたときまで for を使うのは,単に日本語に惑わされているだけだと言わざるを得ない。 書 と

英検二級ライティングの採点お願いします。 ТОРІС It is often said that computer games are bad for children. Do you agree with this opinion? 回答 I agree with the... 続きを読む