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〔4〕 九州大-理系前期 Read the following newspaper article and follow the instructions below. (36) 16 2019年度 英語 in Engligi taul" According to the Kanagawa Prefectural Police Station, a 20-year-old female university student caused a traffic death. The student was riding on a power- She moved off from an assisted bicycle when the accident happened. intersection and started riding on the sidewalk. At that moment, a 77-year-old lady was walking on the sidewalk and moved toward the bicyclist. The student hit the lady. The collision caused the lady to fall and strike her head. She was transported to hospital, but died of her injuries two days later. At the time of the incident, the student was apparently holding a smartphone in her left hand and a drink in her right while steering the power- assisted bike. Moreover, she had an earphone in her left ear. Therefore, police arrested the student for breaking the new law and riding recklessly. Police are investigating whether the student noticed that the old lady was walking toward her. They suspect that she was not paying sufficient attention because she was operating her smartphone right up until the collision. Her court appearance date has not been decided yet. The Mainichi, December 16, 2017 Instructions: Write two well-developed paragraphs in English. In the first paragraph, summarize the main points of the newspaper article above in lo approximately 100 words. Use different vocabulary and sentence structure from the original passage as much as possible. In the second paragraph, write your opinion about what should be done to reduce accidents like this in approximately 50 words. hosidinlong unich lor, condadnoah

英語の問題です。 この答えはtheseも複数形ですがダメなのですか？

1/5 Lesson6 (A) those (B) that X (C) these (D) they 問題文 Visual Tech makes high resolution monitors for professionals, such as graphic designers and game creators, as well as those suitable for non-professionals. Visual Techはグラフィックデザイナーやゲーム クリエイターのようなプロ用の高画質のモニタ ーを作っていますが､ プロ以外の方用のモニタ ーも作っています。 |解説| 空欄は、前出の名詞 (monitors) の繰り返しを 避けるための複数形の代名詞thoseが適切。 次へ

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ES ⓘ Put the underlined parts into Japanese. (▶5-1) 1) You can invite whoever wants to come. あなたは来たいと思う人誰でも招待できる。 2) Whoever comes, tell them I'm out. 誰が来ようとも、私は留守だと言って下さい。 3) I really trust Kenta. I believe whatever he says. 私はケンタをとても信頼している。私は彼が言うことは 4) Whatever he says, don't worry too much about it. 彼が何を言っても、それについて心配しすぎなくて良い? 何でも信じている。 5) Whichever way you take, you will get to the station. どちらの道を選んでも、あなたは駅につける だろう。 2 Put the underlined parts into Japanese. 1) You can use my bike whenever you want. 2) Whenever you come, you'll be welcome. 3) You can sit wherever you like. どこでもあなたの好きなところに座ることができる。 4) However busy she is, she walks her dog every day. どれだけ彼女が忙しくても、彼女は毎日 5) However fast I run, I won't catch the bus. 私がどれだけ速く走っても、私は バスを捕まえることはできない。 (▶5-2) あなたは欲しいときいつでも私のバイクを使ってよい。 あなたが来るときいつでも、あなたを歓迎する。 3 Put the words in the correct order. 1)ポプはとても率直だ。思ったことは何でも口にする。 (his mind, whatever, is on) Bob is very frank. He says_whatever on his mind is 2) 私のチケットをだれでもほしい人にあげるよ。 (whoever, to, it, wants). I'll give my ticket whoever wants to it 3) 私は運賃がどんなに安くても船旅はしたくない。 (is, cheap, however, the fare) I don't want to travel by ship, however the fare is cheap 4) 何が起きてもあきらめないで。 (matter, no, what, happens) don't give up. No matter what happens. 5) 私の兄は写真が大好きだ｡ 彼はどこにいてもいつも写真を撮る。 (where, is, he, matter, no) My brother loves photography. He always takes pictures, no matter where. he is Put the Japanese sentences into English. 1) 冷蔵庫から何でも好きなものを取って召し上がってください。 Help yourself to whatever you like 2) グリーンさんの息子は彼女が行くところはどこでもついて来る。 Ms. Green's son follows her wherever she goes. 3) だれが開けようとしても、 そのドアは開かなかった。 No matter who tried (fare) Give It a Try (help oneself to ~) from the fridge. 4) このレストランは私が来るときはいつでも混んでいる。 This restaurant is always crowded when I come the door wouldn't open. 5) ケイスケはどんなに暑くてもエアコンを使わない｡ conditioner) episuke doesn't use the air conditionemar canon matter how hot it is. Write about yourself or your friends / family. Use however in 1) and whenever in 2). 1. However first get up, I can't get out of the house 2) Whenever come Study

答えはBです。 後者ははアメリカ英語を学習した人にとってはなじみがある。 従って/言い換えると、両方とも正しい英語である。 変ですか？ CとDがおかしい理由教えてください。

The latter may be more familiar to those The former is common in who have learned American English. Why did this happen? Noah Webster, a textbook author and Great Britain, Canada and Australia. lexicographer, wanted "Americanized" spelling and pronunciation of words, different from those in Great In 1828, he published a two-volume dictionary which greatly helped to make the Americanized Britain. spelling common. The fact of the matter was it was part of American nationalism. After winning political from Great Britain in 1776, Americans became more conscious of developing their own identity as a new In literature, Americans rejected such European criticism nation. Nationalism rose in various fields. The northeastern region produced world-famous American as "Americans have no national literature." Which is more familiar to you, "centre" or "center"? writers I Edgar Allan Poe, a detective story writer and Ralph Waldo Emerson. In addition to these writers, there were also inventors who greatly helped in advancing American industry. Cyrus Hall McCormick, the inventor of the reaper, and Samuel F. S. Morse, the developer of the telegram code, are two such inventors. 間 1 In diplomacy, President James Monroe issued in 1823 the so-called "Monroe Doctrine," a warning to European nations not to interfere with America and the Western Hemisphere. It was the American This policy of isolationism embraced in the doctrine continued as the U.S. intention to be オ diplomatic policy until the end of the century. While challenging European criticism and power, young America tried to be more independent of Europe, not only politically, but economically, culturally and diplomatically. (2) lexicographer: ##*** isolationism: ŽÈ* ア both are correct English. 33 空所 A In addition reaper: 刈り取り機 interfere 干渉する Brajcich and Tanioka (2010) Eye on American Culture (**) ***** ア を満たすのに最も適切なものを、A~Dのうちから1つ選べ。 B However C Therefore D In other words

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A. Circle the correct answer for each question. likely to be jealous of someone. 1. You are more 2. Which do many people decorate at Christmas time? 3. Which are people more accustomed to? a. rich a. a feast b. a tree a. spending money b. receiving awards a. an empire b. a rifle a. an insect b. water a. help it b. ruin it 6. What would profit do for a business? a. excited b. confused 7. Which would people rather be? a. a contract b. a feast 8. Which would you invite friends to share with you? a. a recruit b. a contract 9. Which would you sign? a. being punished b. getting a reward 10. Which would few people enjoy? B. Complete the paragraph with items from the box. Two items are extra. Which of these is a weapon? 4. 5. Which of these flows? discovered resembled establishing rights faced status by Roy's s grief the rest of Many people change countries during their life, but one man has (1) (2) son and (10) heir took over This surprised people in the UK, who believed they had the (5) . Bates and (6) to leave the platform. However, Roy (8). in the sea to contain (3) that would be used to fight off invaders. After the war, the soldiers left these platforms and they were forgotten - until 1967. In that year, a British man, Roy Bates, one of the platforms and announced he had started his own country, (4) called Sealand. b. poor himself by his own country. During World War II, the UK built a number of artificial platforms made a name for weapons the people on the island (his family), (7) In 1968, a court decided that the UK had no power over Sealand. Just like other places with the that the platform was in international waters. to the platform. orders of a country, Sealand, has its own stamps, coins, and passports. It is controlled 'Prince' Michael, and is home to a large Internet business. 11 15 69

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⑥6 次のA・Bの問いに答えよ。 (21) A 次の日本文中の下線 (ア) (イ)を英語になおせ。 旅行に行く前には入念な準備が欠かせない。 (ア)十分準備をしているとしても、旅行中 には困ってしまうことがある。 ( ) 子にならないうちに、誰かに目的地までどう行った らよいか聞いた方がよい。 B あなたの高校では、オンライン学習 (online learning) を行った生徒たちに対してア ンケートを実施した。 与えられた 【条件】 に従って、 【あなたの解答】の空所(×) (Y)にそれぞれ 15 程度の英語を補え。 ただし、2文以上になってもかまわない。 【アンケート結果】 ※本アンケートは同じ生徒60名に対して、2021年と2022年に実施した。 <質問>オンライン学習は効果的だと思いますか? [2021年4月施】 いいえ 52% はい 48% 【あなたの解答】 Based on the two graphs, ( I think that is because ( 【2022年4月実施】 いいえ 23% 【条件】 (1) 空所(×)には、2021年と2022年の結果を比較して読みとれることを述べる。 (2) 空所(Y)には、空所(X)におけるオンライン学習の効果の要因として 考えられることについて、あなたの考えを述べる。 - 19- 77% X ). ). 610 77 48 29

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Circle the correct answer for each question. A. likely to be jealous of someone 1. You are more 2. Which do many people decorate at Christmas time? 3. Which are people more accustomed to? 4. Which of these is a weapon? 5. Which of these flows? a. rich b. poor a. a feast b. a tree a. spending money b. receiving awards b. a rifle b. water b. ruin it b. confused b. a feast b. a contract a. a recruit a. being punished b. getting a reward B. Complete the paragraph with items from the box. Two items are extra. 6. What would profit do for a business? 7. Which would people rather be? 8. Which would you invite friends to share with you? 9. Which would you sign? 10. Which would few people enjoy? discovered resembled establishing rights faced status a. an empire a. an insect a. help it a. excited a. a contract grief the rest of (9) by Roy's son and (10) heir took over Many people change countries during their life, but one man has (1) (2) himself by his own country. During World War II, the UK built a number of artificial platforms in the sea to contain (3) that would be used to fight off invaders. After the war, the soldiers left these platforms and they were forgotten - until 1967. In that year, a British man, Roy Bates, (4) one of the platforms and announced he had started his own country, called Sealand. This surprised people in the UK, who believed they had the (5) - Bates and (6) to leave the platform. However, Roy (8). made a name for weapons to the platform. orders In 1968, a court decided that the UK had no power over Sealand. Just like other places with the that the platform was in international waters. of a country, Sealand, has its own stamps, coins, and passports. It is controlled 'Prince' Michael, and is home to a large Internet business. the people on the island (his family), (7) in 11 - 15 69

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A. Circle the correct answer for each question. likely to be jealous of someone 1. You are more 2. Which do many people decorate at Christmas time? 3. Which are people more accustomed to? a. rich a. a feast b. a tree a. spending money b. receiving awards a. an empire b. a rifle a. an insect b. water a. help it b. ruin it a. excited b. confused a. a contract b. a feast a. a recruit b. a contract a. being punished b. getting a reward B. Complete the paragraph with items from the box. Two items are extra. 4. Which of these is a weapon? 5. Which of these flows? 6. What would profit do for a business? 7. Which would people rather be? 8. Which would you invite friends to share with you? 9. Which would you sign? 10. Which would few people enjoy? discovered resembled establishing rights called Sealand. faced status - Many people change countries during their life, but one man has (1) (2). This surprised people in the Bates and (6) to leave the platform. However, Roy (8). (9) by Roy's son and (10) grief the rest of heir took over in the sea to contain (3) that would be used to fight off invaders. After the war, the soldiers left these platforms and they were forgotten - until 1967. In that year, a British man, Roy Bates, one of the platforms and announced he had started his own country, b. poor himself by his own country. During World War II, the UK built a number of artificial platforms made a name for weapons who believed they had the (5) the people on the island (his family), (7) to the platform. orders In 1968, a court decided that the UK had no power over Sealand. Just like other places with the that the platform was in international waters. of a country, Sealand, has its own stamps, coins, and passports. It is controlled 'Prince' Michael, and is home to a large Internet business. in 11-15

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Circle the correct answer for each question. A. likely to be jealous of someone 1. You are more 2. Which do many people decorate at Christmas time? 3. Which are people a. rich a. a feast a. spending money b. receiving awards a. an empire b. a rifle a. an insect b. water a. help it b. ruin it a. excited b. confused a. a contract b. a feast a. a recruit b. a contract a. being punished b. getting a reward B. Complete the paragraph with items from the box. Two items are extra. 4. Which of these is a weapon? 5. Which of these flows? more accustomed to? 6. What would profit do for a business? 7. Which would people rather be? 8. Which would 9. Which would you sign? 10. Which would few people enjoy? discovered resembled you invite friends to share with you? called Sealand. establishing rights faced status grief the rest of Many people change countries during their life, but one man has (1) (2) heir took over (9) by Roy's son and (10) This surprised people in the UK, who believed they had the (5) . Bates and (6) to leave the platform. However, Roy (8) - b. poor in the sea to contain (3) that would be used to fight off invaders. After the war, the soldiers left these platforms and they were forgotten - until 1967. In that year, a British man, Roy Bates, one of the platforms and announced he had started his own country, b. a tree himself by his own country. During World War II, the UK built a number of artificial platforms the people on the island (his family), (7) - - made a name for weapons to the platform. orders In 1968, a court decided that the UK had no power over Sealand. Just like other places with the that the platform was in international waters. of a country, Sealand, has its own stamps, coins, and passports. It is controlled 'Prince' Michael, and is home to a large Internet business. im 11 - 15

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例題 次の文章を読み、問の ~④のうちから一つ選べ。 標準 23: に入れるのに最も適当なものを,下の① The decline (in the number of trips between 2002 and 2010 can be S partly accounted for by falls(in shopping and visiting friends at their 2010) homes) On average, people made only 193 shopping trips per year in as opposed to 214 in 2002. Trips to visit friends)at private homes d/from 123 to 103 per person per year during this period, whereas the number of trips to meet friends at places other than their homes remained almost constant, at 48 in 2002 and 46 in 2010. The fewer trips for shopping and visiting friends at home may, in turn, be explained by certain changes in society that took place over the period surveyed) Vi Vz (UK Department for Transport (2011) National Travel Survey 2010(E) This passage would most likely be followed by a paragraph which compares the numbers of shopping trips and visits (to friends' homes made in 2002 and 2010 by people in Britain C explains how the society in Britain)now demands that people V+ V+o travel more/for business) Vi ⁹)] 3 explores social trends in Britain impacting the number of vt V t shopping trips and visits to friends' homes 4 lists reasons why one can expect people in Britain to travel more V Vt S often using public transportation [追試・改題]