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らみょん

文法的なミスを指摘してください。
文自体は変えたくないので文法ミスを箇条書きして頂けるとありがたいですm(_ _)m
読みにくい英作ですみません。

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Japanese students, most of them must start job
hunting when they become juniors, should
experience working part time while their first and
second years.
By working, they can meet people from various
background, learn the kinds of skills they can't learn
in classrooms, and note the difficulty and
significance to be a worker in society.
Such experiences, along with their studies, will help
them decide what kind of occupation seek after
graduation.
Japanese college students should go to abroad and
talk with foreigners in English.
It will help them improve their ability to speak
English.
Recently, English is becoming more and more
important, and they may have to use English in their
works after graduation.
Almost college students in Japan cannot speak
English even after having studied it for a long time.
That's because they should go to foreign countries
and practice speaking English.
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