英作文チャレンジ2解答解説
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Senior HighSemua
This question i asked you to type the easiet 1 sentences are a little difficult. However, a little more consideration for yourself, you were able to make more
better sentences you did.
Think about how simplified and how is the quality of VOCABULARY you use.
With these points you care yourself, you can be a good English writer.
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あーーそういう答えが求められてるですね
求められてる基準が分からなかったので変に深読みしました…
simple is best！
他と違いを出すには形容詞が重要になるんですね〜