Question

單純想睡覺

這兩個句子為什麼可以這樣改寫

初稿
S
S
When he was in exile, he heard that his country was on the
verge of demise, so he drowned himself in the Mi Lo River.
修飾
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Chu Yuan, hearing that his country was on the verge of demise
in exile, drowned himself in the Mi Lo River.