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不好意思想請問一下有人願意幫忙看一下我的作文並且給我一些建議嗎？
（可能寫的很爛，目前有在紮實訓練翻譯，練習短句子）

Recent years, the streaming services become more
popular. Some people think that it is covenience
to
movies
and more
people watch
at home. Others people think that watching movies at home
can
See
can not watch the big screen
theater. So, we
many people are
watching horror flim, eating popcorns and drinking drinks in the
movie theater in picture A. However, we can only see a person
is watching
flim on the TV and eating some cookies at home
in the picture B. In contrast to the picture A, the picture B
is bored.
is not comfortable because they
in the movie
I love go to the movie theater, so I will choose
the picture A. In the movie theater, I can enjoy the big screen
sight and sit with a lot of strangers to watch the flim. Though
we do not know each other, we both love this movie. Besides,
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MMG
we can sit on the comfortable chairs and enjoy the movie with
poweful sound. In conclusion
I like the
way
that picture A
brings a lot of fun to me
not expensive. Many people
should find
to make our life full of fun.
a more
shows to me. Watching the movie brings
and
my life. A movie ticket 14
can afford. Life is filed, so we
interesting way

英文科非選擇題模擬測驗第8回
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說明:本部分共有二大題,請依各題指示作答,答案必須寫在答題卷標示題號之作答區
內,作答時不必抄題。
中譯英(占8分)
說明:依題號將以下中文句子譯成正確、通順、達意的英文。每題4分,共8分。
1. 近年來,是否廢除死刑(death penalty)是個具有爭議性的議題,每個人都有不同的觀點。
2. 有些人不支持死刑,因為他們認為死刑對減少犯罪沒有影響。
二、英文作文(占20分)
說明:依提示寫一篇英文作文,文長至少 120 個單詞(words)
提示:近年來線上串流平臺(streaming services)越來越受歡迎,有些人覺得方便,選擇在家看
電影,也有些人認為在電影院看電影才能有更好的觀影體驗。請以此為主題,並依據下列
兩張圖片的內容,寫一篇英文作文,文分兩段。第一段請描述這兩張圖片的內容,並說明
其優點;第二段請說明你偏好哪一種方式?為什麼?
B
A

作文 英文作文

Answer 1

joyce

建議把動詞搭配字背清楚
句子拉長，至少兩小句成一句
句型多用，可避免太過口語

Answer 2

學生A

我的建議是可以問chatgpt，他真的很優秀👍🏻