Question

阿保

英検準二級の英作文を添削してほしいです！
Topic: What is the age for people to start learning English?

I think six years old is the best for people to start learning English.
There are two reasons.
First, six years old children can get a lot of chance to learn about English .
Second, they wii talk in English for their life
That is why it is necessary for six years old children to start learning English.

Answer 1

✨ 最佳解答 ✨

taka

以下のような修正があれば、更に良くなると思います。

I think six years old is the best for people to start learning English.
→ I think the age (of)(省略可) six is the best for people to start learning English.
※six years old(6歳の)：形容詞なので is(動詞)の主語になれない → the age (of) six(6歳の年齢)
There are two reasons.　〇
First, six years old children can get a lot of chance to learn about English .
→ First, six-year-old children can get a lot of chances to learn English quickly.
※①six-year-oldでひとつの形容詞にして、形容詞に複数形はないのでyearsではなくyear　②learn about English(英語について学ぶ)→lean English quickly(素早く英語を身につける)
Second, they wii talk in English for their life
→ Second, they will be able to speak in English for their life.
※言語を話す時は 〇talk → ◎speak
That is why it is necessary for six years old children to start learning English.　
→ That is why it is necessary for six-year-old children to start learning English.

参考にしてください。

阿保

ありがとうございます！

taka

You're welcome!😊

Answer 2

taka

以下のような修正があれば、更に良くなると思います。

I think six years old is the best for people to start learning English.
→ I think the age (of)(省略可) six is the best for people to start learning English.
※six years old(6歳の)：形容詞なので is(動詞)の主語になれない → the age (of) six(6歳の年齢)
There are two reasons.　〇
First, six years old children can get a lot of chance to learn about English .
→ First, six-year-old children can get a lot of chances to learn English quickly.
※①six-year-oldでひとつの形容詞にして、形容詞に複数形はないのでyearsではなくyear　②learn about English(英語について学ぶ)→lean English quickly(素早く英語を身につける)
Second, they wii talk in English for their life
→ Second, they will be able to speak in English for their life.
※言語を話す時は 〇talk → ◎speak
That is why it is necessary for six years old children to start learning English.　
→ That is why it is necessary for six-year-old children to start learning English.

参考にしてください。

参考にしてください。