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I went to Shrine without my friends.
I’m looking forward to meet them in the new year.
We have talking for 3hours.
I wanted to talk more time .
I drew fortune slip and it was a lucky one.
It was make me happy.
These things are my good memories.
So I enjoyed my winter vacation.

文法など間違ってるところなどありますか？

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いくつかあります。
☓) I'm looking forward to meet…
・時制: ☓am → ○was
・look forward to ~ing(名詞)
☓) We have talking for 3 hours.
・完了形: have[had] + 過去分詞
☓) It was make me happy.
・過去形: ☓was do → ○did
他にも表現としてあやしいところはありますが、明確な間違いは以上の3つですね。

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ありがとうございます！