Question

marmelo

英語のスピーチです。
厳しめの採点お願いします(>人<;)

I will talk about reading.

Do you know audio books ?

It is a new way of read books.
We can hear the contents of a book.

There are good points to doing it.
First if you have a smartphone, you can read it anywhere.
Second a busy person can read books in a short time.
There are more.

Please try it too.

Answer 1

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Xx_Saskia_xX

修正が必要な点です。

It is a new way of read books. ❌
It is a new way of reading books.⭕

We can hear the contents of a book.❌
We can listen to the contents of a book.⭕
hear は無意識や自然に耳に入ってくる「聞こえる」
listen to は意識したり集中して耳を傾ける「聴く」

There are good points to doing it.❌
There are benefits of audio books.⭕

First if you have a smartphone, you can read it anywhere.❌
First, if you have a smartphone, you can listen to it anywhere.⭕
文頭のFirst の後にコンマが必要
スマホで「読む」のではなく「聴く」のでlisten to

Second a busy person can read books in a short time.❌
Second, when you are busy, you can still finish a book in short time.⭕
文頭のSecond の後にコンマが必要
「忙しくても早く聴き終われる」と書き換えました。

There are more.❌
To name a few.⭕
「他にもまだ良い点はあるが、いくつか主な点を挙げます」という慣用表現です。

Please try it too.❌
I recommend you to try audio books.⭕

marmelo

ありがとうございます！！
説明があって、どうしてその文にしたのか分かりやすかったです！

Xx_Saskia_xX

ベストアンサーを有り難うございます❗